Visually i was there
For me great writing is being able to feel as if i am going thru this too.
You have a way with few words to paint so much
Please continue, i think you have so much to expunge and share
so much more to explore

you killed the rabbit
He killed the rabbit in you
rabbit blood on your underwear?
represents our crazy cycle of our lives
the remorse, the guilt, the pleasure, the joy, the pain, the shame.

I know you have touched my heart
so for me to feel a feeling: is a good thing.
i hope you continue your writings
this will help you and others
i know it has helped me
"You can always hear the laughter but seldom hear a tear fall."
Keith Johnstone