You are very talented. I believe that the gift you have for writing is very special. I agree with the others... tell the story... whatever it is. Tap into the deep places and let it flow! Seek out others to help you develop it to it's fullest level. I was excited to read this little excerpt. You had told me that you wrote stories, but at that time were not ready to share. Thank you for sharing this little piece with us. It is amazing how much you are growing and changing!