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#80301 - 01/12/07 12:40 AM story of a mind
aecrim Offline
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Registered: 11/13/06
Posts: 5
A mind bearing forth
secrets that want to stay hidden
will not open the door to the future
to let the past blend in.
It is a guardian that imprisoned truths
and set deceptions loose unwillingly;
A witness at the mercy of my eyes,
my ears, my lips;
Prey, twisted by an insiders desires
and left to fend for itself;
A coward corrupted by missplaced shame, guilt,
ill-responsibility and saved by the honesty
and loyalty for which it lives.
It lives because it has to...
To uncover the meaning and the courage
behind a reality long lost.

#80302 - 01/12/07 03:45 AM Re: story of a mind
Bobby Offline

Registered: 12/01/04
Posts: 1287
Loc: Arizona
"Sweet" is what I wanted to write here because I thought this was an awesome poem and really appreciated it, but decided that that might be misinterpreted, so I'll say that I thought it was beautifully written and that I enjoyed reading it very much. But right after I finished reading it the word that went through my mind was "sweet".
And it is. Hope that doesn't insult you. (Please let me know if it did.) Thank-you for sharing it with us.


I'm healing now, and I wasn't sure I would.

#80303 - 01/13/07 01:25 AM Re: story of a mind
aecrim Offline
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Registered: 11/13/06
Posts: 5
it doesnt insult me at all, i guess different people will always interpret it differently. I think thats what poems are all about.


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