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#455728 - 12/01/13 05:07 PM Re: Stormy Seas [Re: concerned_husky]
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Registered: 10/30/12
Posts: 682
Loc: Canada
May I add a little for you to consider in your metaphor ?

They see each others light ... and everyone sees the shore,
yet they have a sinking feeling that they may not get to it on their own ...
but the cold angry waves keep them apart.
All each has to offer the other
is a bright speck of illumination in the darkness
and the warmth of knowing that they are not alone.
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#456118 - 12/05/13 12:24 PM Re: Stormy Seas [Re: concerned_husky]
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Edited by concerned_husky (08/30/15 06:39 AM)
Edit Reason: Reducing ties with MS.
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#456247 - 12/06/13 09:31 PM Re: Stormy Seas [Re: concerned_husky]
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Loc: canada
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Edited by bey (01/25/16 04:36 PM)
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#456253 - 12/06/13 10:43 PM Re: Stormy Seas [Re: concerned_husky]
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Registered: 10/30/12
Posts: 682
Loc: Canada
Sometimes it seems
the sliver of wood
from once mighty beams
has rotted away
and left me treading
cold and dreading
all alone ... just me
in the raging sea
...
and I lose hope.

I look around
and see you there
sodden and shivering
simply clinging
to your small piece
staring at me
pale faces
warm with care
...
and I have strength.

Trembling hands
reach out for me
and though too far
for them to touch
it's enough
to keep my head
above the waves
until another shard
frozen hard
comes floating by
...
and I am saved.

Even with
souls salt corroded
looking at a shore eroded
we will not go down
without a fight
we have each other
...
in the candlelight.
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