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#441831 - 07/23/13 03:50 AM i
traveler Offline
Member
MaleSurvivor

Registered: 02/07/06
Posts: 4181
Loc: resettling in NE Ohio
avoiding 1st person
and personal pronouns
is one habit
that helps

instead
substitute
an article:
a or the
works fine

or just
eliminate
the subject
altogether -
most can
figure it out

and never use
possessives
no matter
what

makes it easier
not to
have to
own
or
admit
any kind
of connection

also tends
to minimize
and hide the
personal side
of events
and feelings
and relationships

makes
disappearing
easier

if there is
no subject
and I
was not there
then nothing
could have happened

- right?

lee
22 7 13


Edited by traveler (07/23/13 04:02 AM)
Edit Reason: forgot something
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How long, LORD, must I call for help, but you do not listen?
Or cry out to you, “Violence!” but you do not save?
Why do you make me look at injustice?
Why do you tolerate wrongdoing?...
Therefore the law is paralyzed, and justice never prevails....
Habakkuk 1:2-3

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#441835 - 07/23/13 04:11 AM Re: i [Re: traveler]
victor-victim Offline


Registered: 09/27/03
Posts: 6379
Loc: 𝒪 𝒦anada

mind=blown
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Victor|Victim

War
Love
Poetry

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#441836 - 07/23/13 04:43 AM Re: i [Re: traveler]
peroperic2009 Offline
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Registered: 10/09/11
Posts: 3843
Loc: South-East Europe
Wow Lee, I loveeeeeee this poem, this is superb poetry!!!!

PS. I thought that Magellan is like wine but it seems like we have wine cellar smile


Edited by peroperic2009 (07/23/13 04:45 AM)
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My story

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#441849 - 07/23/13 11:05 AM Re: i [Re: traveler]
bey Offline


Registered: 01/28/10
Posts: 447
Loc: canada
wow, lee
awesome and very timely for me to read it
thanks for sharing
ben
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Benji

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#441911 - 07/23/13 09:44 PM Re: i [Re: traveler]
traveler Offline
Member
MaleSurvivor

Registered: 02/07/06
Posts: 4181
Loc: resettling in NE Ohio
glad you all "like" it.
doing better now.
lee
_________________________
How long, LORD, must I call for help, but you do not listen?
Or cry out to you, “Violence!” but you do not save?
Why do you make me look at injustice?
Why do you tolerate wrongdoing?...
Therefore the law is paralyzed, and justice never prevails....
Habakkuk 1:2-3

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