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#433561 - 05/04/13 09:53 PM BELIEVE
victor-victim Offline


Registered: 09/27/03
Posts: 6287
Loc: 𝒪 𝒦anada
BELIEVE

If reason were master,
Overpowered, I would cower
In the shadow of divine logic.

And if be chance who ruled,
Before it's random precision, I would
Offer my life in quiet servitude.

But I believe that I am more
Than just a leaf in the four
Winds of action, reaction, chaos, and karma.

My will is a weapon
With which I wage war upon
Dragons and demons
Of dark destiny.

My faith is a fortress
Against which cruel forces
Of fate can only lay siege.

Until, alas,
Death does emerge
Victorious at last.

As tears and laughter
Merge hereafter,
Forever and never,

A man.


more of my poems.
http://www.malesurvivor.org/board/ubbthreads.php?ubb=showflat&Number=442275&#Post442275
http://www.malesurvivor.org/board/ubbthreads.php?ubb=showflat&Number=441089#Post441089
http://www.malesurvivor.org/board/ubbthr...3020#Post433020
http://www.malesurvivor.org/board/ubbthreads.php?ubb=showflat&Number=441024#Post441024
http://www.malesurvivor.org/board/ubbthreads.php?ubb=showflat&Number=432554#Post432554
http://www.malesurvivor.org/board/ubbthr...5609#Post435609
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#433610 - 05/05/13 12:59 PM Re: BELIEVE [Re: victor-victim]
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Good stuff brother
I am feeling it


Edited by nltsaved (05/05/13 12:59 PM)
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http://www.malesurvivor.org/board/ubbthreads.php?ubb=showflat&Number=339159#Post339159
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#433618 - 05/05/13 02:57 PM Re: BELIEVE [Re: nltsaved]
victor-victim Offline


Registered: 09/27/03
Posts: 6287
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thanks for your feedback, nltsaved.

this is one of my more artsy-fartsy poems.
most are not so pretty.
this one never made it to song status.
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#434399 - 05/11/13 09:00 PM Re: BELIEVE [Re: victor-victim]
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Loc: upper south
VV- I love your 'artsy-fartsy' piece of writing, as you called it. The following really spoke to me.

Until alas
Death does emerge
Victorious at last

As tears and laughter
Merge hereafter
Forever and never

Thanks for writing and sharing.

b
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#434410 - 05/11/13 09:34 PM Re: BELIEVE [Re: ThisMan]
victor-victim Offline


Registered: 09/27/03
Posts: 6287
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feedback appreciated smile
thank you ThisMan
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#434683 - 05/14/13 07:17 PM Re: BELIEVE [Re: victor-victim]
Shyshark Offline


Registered: 10/30/12
Posts: 681
Loc: Canada
Love it.

... an ode to victor-victim.

As boys
dragons and demons were very real ...
we know ... we saw them ...
there was no fair deal.
How could we know what lay in store ...
how could we then ...
how can we now
with what we have ... wage a war.
And yet ... despite it all ...
We did not fall.
And yes ...
death will come for us one day ...
when and how we cannot say ...
but here we are ... all as one
not today ...
we are not done.

"As tears and laughter
Merge hereafter
Forever and never"
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#434688 - 05/14/13 09:02 PM Re: BELIEVE [Re: Shyshark]
victor-victim Offline


Registered: 09/27/03
Posts: 6287
Loc: 𝒪 𝒦anada
blush
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