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#401432 - 06/23/12 03:24 PM Hawks
dragon Offline

Registered: 04/18/12
Posts: 355
Loc: on the river between Hades n V...
The Hawk
Red tail hawk in my willow tree
a nest of them
family of hawks

so free they are
soaring above the land so high and free
absolute soars and divers
masterful landings set upon my willow tree

sits and stares in my window
upon greeting he moved his head side to side
big eyes bold and bright
wings stretch a great span indeed

won't come to me just yet
just sits and stares and watches
flew on chair next to me
flew back to tree and just sat there

to be free and wild as one as you my dear friends
such beauty and grace
my family of hawks
the hawks of my willow tree
I don't want to look back;I just want to start again;Somebody save me--- Pop Evil: Broken and Betrayed

I want justice I want you overthrown;I want courage I want to stand alone;I want your arrogance and I want your pain;I want your everything and I want you dead--- Rev Theory: Justice

#401524 - 06/24/12 02:21 PM Re: Hawks [Re: dragon]
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Registered: 03/25/12
Posts: 20
Loc: Germany
Strong imagery, which I quite enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. It is clear it is an important memory for you and may it always bring you feelings of connection to the world around you in a good way.
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