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#391646 - 03/31/12 04:17 PM Sunset
Fastedd72 Offline

Registered: 02/18/11
Posts: 19
Loc: Harold Wood
Red mixed with blue and fluffy clouds.
Shimmering silver linings, the end of a perfect day.
The breeze moving the clouds slowly and gently.

Red mixed with blue and fluffy clouds.
Sun setting to end the day.
Light fading slowly and gently.

Red mixed with blue and fluffy clouds.
Sun gone for the day.
Night coming slowly and gently.

Red mixed with blue and fluffy clouds.
Time to sleep for today
Sleep slowly and gently.
I am chiped but not broken

#391650 - 03/31/12 04:26 PM Re: Sunset [Re: Fastedd72]
peroperic2009 Offline


Registered: 10/09/11
Posts: 3791
Loc: South-East Europe
I see beautiful and deep sense for environment in your poem, it collapsed me immediately into moment of sunset.
Thank you for bringing some beauty here!
My story

#391661 - 03/31/12 06:12 PM Re: Sunset [Re: peroperic2009]
dancr6 Offline

Registered: 12/02/07
Posts: 383
Loc: georgia
nice imagery.
I'm a freeman now, his authority's dead
no pain monger lies in my comfortable bed!


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