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#312324 - 11/29/09 10:07 PM Valuable
user2007 Offline
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Registered: 08/13/07
Posts: 346
I want to drop just like a falling star.
Exploding down to Earth without even an 'Oh'
And in that moment I wish the world to see me as valuable.

I wish to cry pain in the form of diamonds,
So as to make you see the wealth of my tears.
And in doing this I wish the world to see me as valuable.

I want to play not the blues,
But the oranges, the yellows, the happy hues
And in doing this I wish the world to see me as valuable.

I wish to be distinguished and yet unknown
To be figured out and explored but not categorised, never categorised.
And in doing this I wish the world to see me as valuable.

I want to feel, I want to love
I want to be one of those you two feel love for
And in that moment I wish YOU to see me as valuable.

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Got my wings clipped
I'm surrounded by
All this pavement"

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#312376 - 11/30/09 11:49 AM Re: Valuable [Re: user2007]
boylikeme Offline


Registered: 08/10/09
Posts: 546
Loc: hell
u should write some music for that one.. it really sounds like a song

i like it

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#312386 - 11/30/09 01:14 PM Re: Valuable [Re: boylikeme]
user2007 Offline
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Oh thanks! xD Though I'm not good in composing music...

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Got my wings clipped
I'm surrounded by
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#312545 - 12/01/09 01:51 PM Re: Valuable [Re: user2007]
DJsport Offline
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Registered: 02/20/08
Posts: 1742
J_M

Awesome. Such feeling!!!!

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#312551 - 12/01/09 03:57 PM Re: Valuable [Re: DJsport]
sono Offline
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Registered: 07/19/09
Posts: 1069
J,

I certainly think you've found at least one of your callings...putting feelings into a musical (I agree with corey) combination of words which speak to others in that way that only a work of art can...particularly if the reader has had those same feelings.

thank you,

sono

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#312658 - 12/02/09 11:53 AM Re: Valuable [Re: sono]
user2007 Offline
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Registered: 08/13/07
Posts: 346
Thank you DJ, Sono, I'm glad you guys liked it!

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Got my wings clipped
I'm surrounded by
All this pavement"

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#312784 - 12/03/09 09:15 AM Re: Valuable [Re: user2007]
michael Joseph Offline
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Registered: 03/11/01
Posts: 2719
Loc: Virginia
very nice J

MJ

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#312816 - 12/03/09 01:26 PM Re: Valuable [Re: michael Joseph]
user2007 Offline
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Thanks MJ!

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Got my wings clipped
I'm surrounded by
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#312868 - 12/03/09 10:32 PM Re: Valuable [Re: user2007]
Derdlecar Offline
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Registered: 11/08/05
Posts: 1316
Loc: Ogden Utah, USA
J,

Thanks so very much for sharing this very precious gift of poetry because if you didn't give it as a free gift, I would NEVER be able to afford it, (and I mean this from the bottom of my heart) because you are so very very valuable.

Love ya
Darrel

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#312948 - 12/04/09 02:27 PM Re: Valuable [Re: Derdlecar]
user2007 Offline
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Registered: 08/13/07
Posts: 346
Wow, thanks a lot Darrel! When I come here I finally feel there are people who value me in a way. Thanks, really.

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Got my wings clipped
I'm surrounded by
All this pavement"

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