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#194942 - 12/12/07 12:58 PM The law of attraction hinders me.
hope41 Offline
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Registered: 12/10/07
Posts: 9
Loc: USA
I fight I bite I claw I saw
Each and every kind of law
That says I just pick a straw

I get what I want the only flaw
But my heart just can not thaw
So the floor it holds my only jaw

Pain is just a big bear paw
As the ravens I do hear they caw
I cant get over the common law

I get what I want is what they say
My mind gives me the reason to stay
But Pain is making my future gray

I want my sorrows and doubts to lay
In a six foot grave I dug today
So happieness is my minds new prey

Not sadness not doubt not ever pain
Not things that my life may never gain
These just make the happieness drain

I get what I think every single day
But pain is all I think is the only way
Please force my heart just to sway


#195337 - 12/15/07 01:16 PM Re: The law of attraction hinders me. [Re: hope41]
roadrunner Offline
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Registered: 05/02/05
Posts: 22045
Loc: Carlisle, PA

Sometimes what we want is not what we need. Your poem shows the results with all the references to pain, and awareness of what's going wrong, if it isn't a solution, is at least the first real step towards a solution.

Much love,

Nobody living can ever stop me
As I go walking my freedom highway.
Nobody living can make me turn back:
This land was made for you and me.
(Woody Guthrie)


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